Incredibly well written. The ambiguity leaves a lot of questions which I'm sure will be answered later on. A nice cliffhanger at the end wanted me to read more.

Great Job.

Your Mistress.

For those who know of me, you either love me or you hate me. I am passion. I am raw. I am your friend. I am your enemy. Judge me and look me over as you will, because I am certainly doing that to you.

Overall, I am just me with that likes to see as much pain as I do pleasure. I love romance and drama, but not without the spice of 'life' thrown in. Nothing is perfect. Nothing is safe. Everything is suspect and usually those who feel secure are the first to be trampled in the quagmire of reality.

I have written several stories in fanfiction under the same name and have worked with authors such as LOTLOF (Lord of the Land of Fire)and others who have been graced with my help as I have with theirs.

Several stories that I have written are Get What You Wanted, A Dark Influence: Wave Arc, The Bet, and The Fourth's Legacy.

This will be my first time trying an original story. One of which many will see as a good reflection of the story Get What You Wanted, which I will name here under something similar.

Either way, I look forward to learning you all and you getting to know me. Please, feel free to introduce yourselves.

I promise to just nibble and not bite.

Just remember who and what I am.

Your Mistress.

I have to say the time skip from the past to the present was a bit of a head shake, but introducing Renee and Nolson was well done. You definitely get get the feel of 'seedy' in her, yet there is something innocent about how she 'needs' him, and we're not just talking 'sex' either.

There is definitely a diamond in the rough inside of her.

Can't wait to read more.

Your Mistress.