Discussion of "Covered in Blood" by theblackhand

Very well-written, I wanna know more about this killer!

This is a great example of using repetition without losing the reader. Common words repeat with different meanings. Super satisfying stylistic simplicity.

This was well done as usual my friend.
You have the gift of attention getting and we all hunger for that.

Great job!!!

Thanks cjbishop.

Thanks alharrris and thmagnopen as well. I may continue this, if reader demand wants it. I sure enjoyed writing it. It just hit me all of a sudden and I had to get it down fast.

so twisted. you are awesome theblackhand. i always cringe with your work, which is exactly what i want to do.
this bit was my fav...
"Muthaphuck those who loved the ones I have buried here."

I wrote Muthaphuck that way because I wanted it to be understood what I meant in the story. The correct spelling would have been blotted out because of the language. Somehow I feel that you knew this already. Your mind is that sharp. Thanks for commenting, you are one of the ones I wanted to see this. Your comments/feedback are always helpful and encouraging.

That was brilliant. The way he wrote it, I could picture what was exactly happening... How I wish I could write like that guy...

TBH, no matter how long I stay away from the mash, you're one of the authors whose work I look for first. My favorite line is, "Notice how they darken after a few days."

Disturbing...

Thanks vorgerinix. Your comments made my day.

Thank you too djinnedarme. I appreciate your comments. I am honored that yoy are a fan of my work. This is disturbing, indeed...

Twisted. Another great entry blackhand. You could write a fictional memoir of a serial killer and I'd be enthralled throughout. Nice one.

Thank you so much...

Too many great sentences, word play and descriptive excellence to mention...;o). It's always a pleasure to read your work, TBH!

Thanks writerwannabe, I am glad you read it. You have always been a dependable reader of my work. I am a big fan of yours has well, have been from day one.

If this were any better I'd be reporting you to the authourities just to be on the safe side.

Wow...thanks Gonzo_Mitchell