want to participate?
login or register

Discussion of "October Chill: Emptiness (6)" by theblackhand


1 theblackhand 3 years, 8 months ago Reply

I am not familiar with the layout of orchards, so I hope I did this some justice....


  hidden comment from theblackhand with score of 1
1 honeygloom 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Nice! I liked the physical description of the preacher. Very detailed and very creepy.


  hidden comment from honeygloom with score of 1
1 writerwannabe 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Muy excellento! Great job, blackhand. 5 points!
Our boy is certainly in deep, deep "Kimche" that's for sure...lol.


  hidden comment from writerwannabe with score of 1
1 theblackhand 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Thanks writerwannabe and honeygloom...the writings of both of you are amazing and such comments coming from you speaks volumes.


  hidden comment from theblackhand with score of 1
1 wsells 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Finally catching up - way to take this to another level. I could smell the acrid apples and his panic! Great job!


  hidden comment from wsells with score of 1
Add Comment