Discussion of "Following in the Footsteps of Ray...." by theblackhand

Oh my this book is getting really really good! I'm so upset it's not finished yet. Very good writing and plot/story line.

No offense, TBH, but this is pretty bare at this point. I hope that you will add some detail, in particular as to what he has already done to the victim and more about his "connection" to Ray before you publish.

I'm about ready to start my string....;o)

I am not finished yet, wwb....

LMAO...I know, that's why I offered some suggestions...;o)

This chapter will be completely finished by the weekend. I have over 3 chapters, I just need to put finishing touches on this one.

Ahhhh, the finished product is sooo good, TBH!

Very graphic, vivid descriptives, excellent dialogue....;o). I really like Ray showing up on the computer and "joining" the party...lol.

Excellent job!!!

Is it possible to contribute to this project or has everything been taken...

Everything is taken as of now.

After these stories are told I will ask for more writers to do other serails (maybe Dennis Rader, Gary Ridgeway, Aileen Wuornos) so come back then.

serials...not serails

This is well-written - but standard. That's just me, though: I prefer thought-provoking stuff.

I still have a few chpts left for this project. I hate that interest has waned, but whatever....

TBH, I have been away from SM for quite a while, but I am glad to see there are still some projects out there. I've always enjoyed your writing, so I look forward to the continuation.

If you have any other projects pending, I hope you'll keep me in mind. While I do have a dark side, I'm not sure I'd be able to do this story line justice. However, I hope to post something of mine in the near future and I always welcome your comments.

Ahhh, tbh…this creeped me out brother. And you can take that as a compliment. The detail is cringe worthy, however you never push it too far. And with subject matter like this, that’s saying a lot.
I know this project has been ‘on-going’ for a while, but I’m hoping that something eventually ties it all together. Did Lucifer have a master plan from the beginning? Why does he have to be involved in all their shenanigans? What is to become of all these lost souls?
Very dark man. Great job.