Discussion of "The Picture Frame" by theblackhand

Proofread before you publish, a few mistakes here and there. Also the first part the dialogue doesn't seem right to me, though of course I'm not sure! Otherwise LOVED IT. Kind of saddening with the old lady all alone, and at the same time scary with the history of the frame. All in all a little mysterious and great! Like to see where this "project" goes!

Thanks rock. I added more here, but it is still in draft.

I am going to ponder on new ideas before I publish....

Hope you all enjoy....

I saw the few mistakes also but I got to tell ya man, I liked the story alot!
You have a great way of capturing a persons attention.
Great job and I hope to see more.

nice if you have time i am a little bit confused on the whole harriet/anna thing and what happened to her/them
but great writing and original plot

Anna experienced the pain and death of Harriet through the picture frame....thank you Marykm for reading.

Very nice story line! I'll be looking for the next chapter! =)

I liked the idea of a haunted picture frame. I don't think you need to add the Anna in parrenthesis, most people know where you are going with the intro paragraph. As usual, very original piece!!

Thanks thamagnopen, Marykm, LadyAdelia,and cnd140 for reading....

i agree with cnd140 that the (Anna) is unnecessary. Just trust the reader to figure out where the story's going. actually, this involves trusting your writing, more than anything. and you should, because this is a good one! Can't wait to see what happens next.

I wanted the reader to understand what was unfolding with Anna ....and I guess you all did.

Thanks for reading and commenting.