Discussion of "A Ray of Darkness...." by theblackhand

Wow! Excellent job, TBH! You really established the tone for this project and developed Evan's character nicely; to say nothing of building on Lucifer!! ;o)

I don't think I'll have Lucifer so much in the picture as you did. Not to say that that didn't work quite well...it certainly did!

Great idea for a project, fabulous start on your piece and thanks, for inviting me to this party!!

*shiver* Ugh that one made me feel a little sick. Twisted and dark and terrible. Awesome!

I can't say it better than Jack. That was horrific. Really well done.

Thanks everyone....

tbh~ Well crafted my friend. I particularly enjoyed the dream sequence. It was fast paced and tense. I easily developed visuals for your scene and characters, which is a testament to your skill. I’m not sure I want to read on…but only because I’m concerned about poor Angela. This could get ugly.
Great job.