Discussion of "Mind Altering Drug" by theblackhand

Not Bad.
Is this your first attempt at poetry?

I have more...been writing poetry for years. Just don't post much of it.

it started almost whitman, then almost mythical like beat, then it turn into flowing water with rock's obstacle's. you should post your poetry more often. if time try readin Joints of grass, a collection of peom;s, or breeze we are. other's. i been slacking lately in wriiting and commenting for being internetless for a while..

Hellova monologue! As I read it I thought I was inside the mind of Manson.

Manson, ha! I may need to reevaulate myself...thanks for reading.

Hello theblackhand, I see that you are still kicking ****! How are you doing my friend? Going to try again,just been too busy, let's see. Hello everyone else!!

I am ok friend...I hope you will come back.

The first Manchego/Ramirez is finally finished