Discussion of "Friends____Friends" by theblackhand

I admire good titles. This one is great. It fits perfectly. The title becomes poetic itself...evidence of a true poet. The contrasting behavior of friends and so-called friends is creatively played out. Initially I felt I had come across a timeless piece, a poem that was carefully crafted so that the reader could not tell if it was written 50 years ago, or 50 years from now. I am biased towards poetry and believe that if it is meant to be read by strangers, then it needs a timeless quality. One line took that away from me. 'Chucky's hi de ho'. It means nothing to me. If your writing is a personal endeavor meant for a specific readership of like minds, like ages, friends, family, and fans of common genre then the Chucky reference is fine...if not perfect. But you are too good of a writer to limit yourself. Having said that, it's important to admit that you are a better poet than I am and this poem is among the best that has come across these pages all summer. More poems, please.

Wow....I am touched. Thank you for such strong and encouraging comments. The Chucky line is dumb, I know that now.

But your kind words give me a renewed inspiration. I wrote a piece called "Pendulum of Thoughts" if you wish to read something different of mine. Again, thanks for your kind words.

thanks.. it's good to be back... now that I have some time, I'm gunna finish Crybaby Bridge... interested in helping?

I just finished an installment to C-B, so feel free to add whenever you'd like

artfully done

and, as already discussed, the Chucky line is ... not good.

I love this poem! I feel sheepish saying it but, the Chucky line made me giggle. I really liked it. To each his own, right? :P

I thought it was a great poem. I wasn't into it at first, but it progressively pulled me further and further until my head was shaking yes, yes, yes! like a herbal essence commercial.

great poem!