daughter's...(one not two).

Brings back memories of my daughters 1st day of school. She did not want me out of her sight. Like most first timers she cried like hell. It crushed me to leave her, but she eventually manged well.

Thanks vorgerinix. Your comments made my day.

Thank you too djinnedarme. I appreciate your comments. I am honored that yoy are a fan of my work. This is disturbing, indeed...

There aren't may who can spin so well like you do. I understood the meanings of the three rivers and what you meant by the rivers ultimately eradicating human waste, how it can provide a clean slate, and also how frightening the world has gotten, providing alternate ways on how to feel/become alive again.

I wrote Muthaphuck that way because I wanted it to be understood what I meant in the story. The correct spelling would have been blotted out because of the language. Somehow I feel that you knew this already. Your mind is that sharp. Thanks for commenting, you are one of the ones I wanted to see this. Your comments/feedback are always helpful and encouraging.

Thanks alharrris and thmagnopen as well. I may continue this, if reader demand wants it. I sure enjoyed writing it. It just hit me all of a sudden and I had to get it down fast.

Thanks cjbishop.

Bold and told from the heart. Great poem.

You have tremendous potential. When you find your niche and fine tune your style you will be a better writer.
Learn how to keep your readers attention by making less more, while building tension by keeping things mysterious...but always propelling your story ahead and keeping readers interest.

I hope to see you famous one day, world renowned...