Discussion of "2 Hours Later: Atlantic City" by the-swamp
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abundantwater 7 months, 1 week ago
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the swamp, I like the direction this story is going in, I also like the way you picked up the next chapter--to me its falls in sync. What do you think? Do you want to alternate chapters? Let me know. I really like what you have added to the mash. |
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the-swamp 7 months, 1 week ago
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Sure, sounds grand! I'm somewhat new to the mash, and it's nice to finally be able to go somewhere on a story. |
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abundantwater 7 months ago
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Well that sounds great, I am a new kid on block to. I know what you mean. I would also like to see a story go somewhere. I think we have similar writing styles, and I like the storyline. |
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HuntsFamousWolf 7 months ago
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it reminds me of midnight cowboy. i like it as well |
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