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Discussion of ""The Ghost in the attic"" by thamagnopen


2 xoxundefined 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

Just in time for Halloween! I really liked the story line, great writting!

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1 thamagnopen 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Thanks for your kind comments!

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1 Marykm 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

it wasn't the worst it could be, but i just don't think it was very well written.

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1 thamagnopen 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Thanks for your perusal!!!
I appreciate it.

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1 cnd140 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

This had the beginnings of a really good story. I think it was a bit hurried after the party scene, and would be better if it could be fleshed out more.

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1 thamagnopen 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

It was written for the purpose of a short story, and I am writing more into this story for later.
Thanks for taking the time to read.
I appreciate it.

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