Discussion of ""The Memoirs of Feliciano Cortese"" by thamagnopen

An interesting prospect. I kinda like it. And the generalities were very PC of you :P Look forward to reading more about Feliciano Cortese.

Thanks Jackoalltrades for your comment.
Explain what you mean by generalities being PC if you would, I am always trying to pick someones brain on how to be better.
I started this story to see if I could get others to write what they wished in the future was fixed for the better. Hopefully someone else will dare to dream.

I was like, hmmm let's see if I can make it as if life is not what it seems. :)