Discussion of ""The Dream That Almost Killed Me"" by thamagnopen
Phenotype_A 4 years, 6 months ago
I, for one, am fascinated by dreams, so your title sucked me in right away. It has the stream of consciousness feeling of being right in the dream. It reminds me of how I record my dreams. Sometimes there are no transitions, we simply find ourselves in places, and the plot of the dream rolls along. Fantastic job, I must say. Well written, captivating and thought provoking. The part at the end where you are falling, grasping for anything, and finding nothing (not exact quote), that was brilliant. Write on!
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