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thamagnopen	Date Joined: March 15, 2008 Last Login: Oct. 29, 2012

355 Comments by thamagnopen

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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context Thanks Ed it was Principal, and yes I have thought of bringing his office friend into the fold.
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context I Like it alot!! Great dream sequence my friend. The bible quotes are fantastic!
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context Wish we could go back at anytime and improve on the stories we write... seems like an easy thing to accomplish. A Flashback you say? Humm
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context Thanks ed and yes you are right but I couldn't change it.
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context Very creative and well written! I enjoyed it very much.
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context Very creative and well written! I enjoyed it very much.
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context This was well done as usual my friend. You have the gift of attention getting and we all hunger for that. Great job!!!
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 2 months ago Context This was utterly fantastic!!!!!!!!!!
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 3 months ago Context Not a bad start to a story. I liked the sherlock holmes bit and would like to see it continued. Great Job.
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1		thamagnopen 3 years, 3 months ago Context Very good and well intend message. Congrats on a great message.
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208 Chapters by thamagnopen

"Militants" by thamagnopen

2.8/5.0 - published Jul 31, 2011 - no comments (preview)

It is five-thirty in the morning and I am up getting ready for work when I hear a commotion next door at my friends Don and Mary’s house.
Tags: arabic, cells, militants, murderers

"DUI "The Gamble of life"" by thamagnopen

3.5/5.0 - published Apr 03, 2011 - 2 comments (preview)

Its three o’clock in the morning and me and three other friends are on our way to our favorite casino in Oklahoma City.
Tags: accident, crash, dui, gambling

"The Hole" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Mar 18, 2011 - no comments (preview)

I lay here in absolute total confinement in the fetal position enveloped in total darkness on a cold cement floor completely naked. They call this place “The Hole.”
Tags: short, story

"The "Hole"" by thamagnopen

3.7/5.0 - published Dec 01, 2010 - no comments (preview)

I lay here in absolute total confinement in the fetal position enveloped in total darkness on a cold cement floor completely naked. They call this place “The Hole.”
Tags: confinement, hole, mind, prison, the

"Life after Life"(draft) by thamagnopen

-- /5.0 - created on Nov 21, 2010 - 1 comment (preview)

This day was no different from any other day in my life after loosing the one person that meant the world to me.
Tags: afterlife, life

"A Senseless Occurance" by thamagnopen

3.8/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2010 - no comments (preview)

This story starts at the corner of 56th street and Pine where a young man is held up in an apartment buildings top floor with a one-year-old child named Adam.
Tags: cancer, heartbreak, story, suicide, thamagnopen

"Thursday toward the end of days" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Mar 20, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)

I started my car and headed straight for work. Even after losing a day, I was still dressed as if I was going to the office.
Tags: days, end, thursday

"Wednesday thru Thurday morning" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Mar 18, 2010 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)

The Plot thickens
Tags: existence

"Wednesday Morning" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Mar 15, 2010 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)

Wednesday and the story goes on...
Tags: biblical, story

"Wednesday--- Five days until the end of existance" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Mar 09, 2010 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)

The story continues....
Tags: days, end, of

"Monday- Seven days till the end of existence" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Feb 12, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)

I wake up six thirty in the morning as usual and stagger out of bed to the bathroom while listening to the television
Tags: days, end, reckoning

"Sunday- Eight days till the end of existence" by thamagnopen

3.8/5.0 - published Feb 11, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)

I woke to the television blaring a report of several crazy people on corners preaching the gospel and saying the end was near.
Tags: days, end, of, reckoning

"Reckoning" by thamagnopen

3.6/5.0 - published Feb 10, 2010 - 5 comments (preview)

The clouds are rushing across the sky as if to be racing each other...
Tags: days, end, of, reckoning

"Show His Love (Poem for Haiti)" by thamagnopen

3.9/5.0 - published Jan 17, 2010 - no comments (preview)

A Poem I was forced to write...
Tags: destruction, haiti

"The Invocation" by thamagnopen

3.0/5.0 - published Dec 13, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)

[One day in time, long, long ago a girl lived in the deep woods of Bourbon County, Kentucky. She was named Sheelah by her mother who had her at thirteen years of age by a much older man, not to mention a relative.]
Tags: hexes, invocation, kentucky, spells, voodoo

"WIsh List [Poetry]" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Dec 12, 2009 - no comments (preview)

I wish I had the power To electrify mankind To regenerate the economy To reinvigorate one’s mind.
Tags: existence, life, poetry

"Me and Bobbi Joe" by thamagnopen

4.2/5.0 - published Nov 30, 2009 - 8 comments (preview)

It’s School vacation and as the first light appears, it shines into my window and right into my face. That warmth wakes me every morning around the same time.
Tags: short, story

"Rant and scatter shooting" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Sep 13, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

This is just a rant of mine that I had to share with the whoever that come across it.
Tags: government, lies, racism, rant, ss

"Visitors Chapter II"(draft) by thamagnopen

-- /5.0 - created on Sep 10, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)

A continuation and learning experience...
Tags: ghost

"Visitors" by thamagnopen

3.8/5.0 - published Sep 10, 2009 - 6 comments (preview)

A story of a child with a special and quite weird gift.
Tags: afterlife

"The Unidentified" by thamagnopen

3.0/5.0 - published Aug 30, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)

a unbelieveable experience that happened or didn't....
Tags: ufo, unidentified

"The Fifth Ward" by thamagnopen

3.2/5.0 - published Aug 23, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)

Life in the 60/ fifth ward style...
Tags: fifth, hood, life, ward

"The Man Beneath the Street Chapter1" by thamagnopen

3.5/5.0 - published Aug 20, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)

A story of life on the streets for one homeless survivor...
Tags: hobo, homeless, vagrant

"Snub Nose" by thamagnopen

3.9/5.0 - published Aug 03, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

A Story of happenstance...
Tags: 38, nose, snub

"The Boy Who Sprouted Wings Chapter II"(draft) by thamagnopen

-- /5.0 - created on Jun 03, 2009 - no comments (preview)

A continuation of a weird story...
Tags: aliens, angels, wings

"The Boy Who Sprouted Wings Chap II" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Jun 03, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)

Chapter II of the Boy Who Sprouted Wings...
Tags: angels, wings

"The Boy Who Sprouted Wings" by thamagnopen

3.8/5.0 - published May 16, 2009 - 3 comments (preview)

My story begins with me as an eight year old living adjacent to Sheppard Air Force Base in Wichita Falls, Texas where my Father was an Air man, and my Mother worked at the City Mental Hospital.
Tags: boy, fantasy, wings

"Benny" by thamagnopen

2.8/5.0 - published Apr 22, 2009 - no comments (preview)

Benny was a fragile fool that could be easily hurt by the occasional innocent comment by his co- workers, so at the job he was shunned most of the time.
Tags: machines, robotics

"What's my place in this world called Earth" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Apr 22, 2009 - no comments (preview)

What’s my place in this world called Earth What’s my cause since the day of my birth, What was the plan when I took my first breath And how long have I before I meet death.
Tags: master, place, plan, world

"A Visiting Spirit"(draft) by thamagnopen

-- /5.0 - created on Apr 09, 2009 - no comments (preview)

An eerie story of a child that sees dead people.
Tags: afterlife, mediums, spiritualist

"Why I write" by thamagnopen

3.9/5.0 - published Apr 08, 2009 - 5 comments (preview)

Why I like to write...
Tags: existence, life, poetry

"A Girl Named Joy (Life Poetry)" by thamagnopen

3.8/5.0 - published Mar 26, 2009 - no comments (preview)

Once there was a girl name Joy Who thought inside she was a boy Though her body was the Fe of the male Her mind would tell a different tale.
Tags: life, poetry

"Tizzy (End Chapter)" by thamagnopen

3.7/5.0 - published Mar 26, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)

After the Funeral of the House Mother Tizzy did take over the Business as House Mother even though she was one of the youngest Women in the Brothel.
Tags: brothel, stories-tizzy-carter

"Tizzy Carter (A Brothel Story)" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Mar 26, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)

Tizzy Carter woke up from the smell of Coffee, and Bacon cooking downstairs in the brothel she works at with a big smile on her face in remembrance of the night before.
Tags: brothel, stories

"The Hunt" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Mar 09, 2009 - no comments (preview)

A weird story of hunter and the hunted...
Tags: hunted, hunter

"You think you know me?" by thamagnopen

3.9/5.0 - published Mar 01, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

From the mind of a Child...
Tags: child, teenage

"Poetic Life" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Mar 01, 2009 - no comments (preview)

Life in poetry
Tags: 1956, events, life, poetic

"GangStaland-Chapter1" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Feb 27, 2009 - no comments (preview)

Just one story of one incident in one moment in time...
Tags: chapters, crime-drugs, gangstas, undercover

"Uncommented(Poem)" by thamagnopen

3.5/5.0 - published Feb 25, 2009 - 3 comments (preview)

A thought provoking Poem...
Tags: poem

"Police Stories 1" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Feb 24, 2009 - no comments (preview)

Just another story from the police blotter...
Tags: police, stories

"A Prisoner of my Mind" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Feb 23, 2009 - no comments (preview)

A story narrated from within...
Tags: coma

"A Story Poem" by thamagnopen

3.1/5.0 - published Feb 22, 2009 - no comments (preview)

My Attempt at writing a Story in poem fashion..
Tags: poem, story

"When Death came calling" by thamagnopen

3.5/5.0 - published Feb 19, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

A short twilight zoney type of story...
Tags: twilight, zone

"THEM" by thamagnopen

3.6/5.0 - published Feb 16, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

A Meaningful and Meaningless Rant about everything America...
Tags: rant

"We Live On" by thamagnopen

3.7/5.0 - published Feb 13, 2009 - no comments (preview)

A piece of Poetry...
Tags: existence, life, poetry

"The Second Coming" by thamagnopen

3.1/5.0 - published Feb 12, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

A story of Belief... or non belief
Tags: biblical, story

"When God Came Down" by thamagnopen

2.7/5.0 - published Feb 10, 2009 - no comments (preview)

My wife and two children dropped me off at the airport two hours before I was to board and I still felt hurried for some reason, with all the checks and metal detectors it seemed to take forever to get into the loading area...
Tags: experiences, planes, scary

"Valentines Peak" by thamagnopen

3.1/5.0 - published Feb 08, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

A weird twist on a love story...
Tags: valentines

"Valentines Collage 2009" by thamagnopen

3.7/5.0 - published Feb 05, 2009 - no comments (preview)

A Valentines Collage for 2009 "It's all about true love,and the meaning of"
Tags: love, poems, valentines

"The Nightmare of all Nightmares (adult Kinda)" by thamagnopen

2.5/5.0 - published Feb 04, 2009 - no comments (preview)

The Nightmare of all Nightmares
Tags: nightmares

"Why I'm like I am- (Poetry)" by thamagnopen

3.9/5.0 - published Feb 01, 2009 - 6 comments (preview)

There is a reason why I'm like I am My DNA runs deep, Some say I snore just like my dad When we are fast asleep.
Tags: existence, life, poetry

"Ode To My Father" by thamagnopen

4.8/5.0 - published Jan 31, 2009 - 10 comments (preview)

As my consciousness awakened to know and recognize people, I was introduced to my Father...
Tags: father, ode

"The Gathering" by thamagnopen

3.2/5.0 - published Jan 30, 2009 - no comments (preview)

A time to pass in a mans life...
Tags: gathering

"Will you still love me (Barack Poem- My View)" by thamagnopen

4.1/5.0 - published Jan 22, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)

"My View from inside his mind"
Tags: my, osama, view

"The Voices of my Children" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Jan 18, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

A story of lost love and Abortion...
Tags: abortion

"Winchester Falls (Finale)" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)

Now we know! but they dont still...
Tags: short, story

"Wnchester Falls part2" by thamagnopen

3.7/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)

It's becoming more clear...
Tags: short, story

"Wnchester Falls" by thamagnopen

3.3/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2009 - 4 comments (preview)

A stranger came calling...
Tags: short, story

"The House Of Nostalgia part3" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)

"It's starting to get weirder"
Tags: short, story

"The House Of Nostalgia part2" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)

The story thickens...
Tags: short, story

"The House Of Nostalgia" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2009 - no comments (preview)

A new business rode into a small Ohio town and really caused an uproar...
Tags: nostalgia, short, story

"For the young Unknown [Poetic]" by thamagnopen

2.8/5.0 - published Dec 27, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A Thought provoking Message for the up and coming.
Tags: poetry

"The Visit Part I" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Dec 22, 2008 - no comments (preview)

An outsider looking in...
Tags: body, inhabitants, snatcher

"NO COMMENT........................................" by thamagnopen

3.9/5.0 - published Dec 22, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)

A poetic Chapter of thoughtful attention and reaction.
Tags: chapter, comment, poetry, thought-provoking

"The Possession Chapter II-finale" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Dec 20, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)

It Continues...
Tags: occult, possession

"The Possession (Chapter I of II)" by thamagnopen

2.7/5.0 - published Dec 19, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A unexplained unholy happening...
Tags: possession, unholy

"Kenya are you there?" by thamagnopen

2.8/5.0 - published Dec 18, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A short story of mystery...
Tags: cellphone, mystery, short, wave

"The Beast Of Greenwich Village" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Dec 14, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A Murderer and a hero...
Tags: a, and, heroism, murder, of, story

"The December I Remember" by thamagnopen

3.4/5.0 - published Nov 30, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A Christmas Short Story...
Tags: christmas, short, story

""The Ultimate Answer"" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Nov 29, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A short story of Angelic Joy...
Tags: angelic, answers, joy

""Just Wondering WHY?"" by thamagnopen

3.0/5.0 - published Nov 25, 2008 - 10 comments (preview)

A light hearted Questionaire.....
Tags: questionaire, why

"Married to my Cousin- Finale" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Nov 24, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)

Worse case got much worse...
Tags: cousins, kissin

"Married To my Cousin- Part 1" by thamagnopen

3.5/5.0 - published Nov 24, 2008 - 7 comments (preview)

The Ultimate Mistake that caused the ultimate Mistake...
Tags: cousins, kissing

"A Soldier Story Part 3" by thamagnopen

3.1/5.0 - published Nov 24, 2008 - no comments (preview)

The story continues thru the mind of a soldier...
Tags: soldier, story

"My Lucky Day that turn to Hell (Finale)" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Nov 21, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A Lucky day that went so awful wrong quickly.
Tags: bad, day, hell, lotto, luck

"My Lucky Day that turn to Hell chapter5" by thamagnopen

2.1/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2008 - no comments (preview)

The plot just thickened...
Tags: day, hell, lotto, lucky

"My Lucky Day that turn to Hell chapter4" by thamagnopen

2.1/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2008 - no comments (preview)

The lucky hell day goes on...
Tags: hell, lotto, lucky

"My Lucky Day that turn to Hell -Chapter 3" by thamagnopen

2.3/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)

A day that kept on getting worse...
Tags: lotto, lucky

"My Lucky Day that turn to Hell -chapter 2" by thamagnopen

2.5/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)

A lucky day that wasn't quite that lucky...
Tags: lotto, lucky

"My Lucky Day that turn to Hell" by thamagnopen

2.5/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2008 - 8 comments (preview)

The lucky day that turned to hell...
Tags: hell, lottery

"A Soldiers Story Chapter 2" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Nov 15, 2008 - no comments (preview)

A Soldiers Story
Tags: soldier, war

"A soldier story (Chapter 1)" by thamagnopen

2.5/5.0 - published Nov 09, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)

Just another Soldier Story...
Tags: war

"The Little Girl That Wasn't There (Full Short Story)" by thamagnopen

2.7/5.0 - published Nov 02, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)

It was September 3rd 1956 about ten after twelve in the morning. I was heading downstairs to the kitchen on my regular food binge when I saw her, a little girl sitting under the dinner table looking out at me with terrible fear in her eyes...
Tags: afterlife, mediums, spiritualist

"Can a Black Man Be President Of these United States?" by thamagnopen

3.0/5.0 - published Oct 20, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)

Political Musings {Just Thinking out Loud}
Tags: musing, political, thoughts

"The Sequoia Tree (Finale)" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Oct 19, 2008 - no comments (preview)

The Finale of a great children and adult story of "Faith"
Tags: faith, story

"The Sequoia Tree Chapter 4" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Oct 19, 2008 - no comments (preview)

Chapter 4 of a great little story of "faith"
Tags: faith, story

"Sequoia tree chapter (4)" by thamagnopen

2.9/5.0 - published Oct 19, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)

A continuation of faith
Tags: continued, faith