Discussion of "STARFIGHTERS - Genesis (Prologue)" by terencewang101
terencewang101 2 years, 2 months ago
I apologise for a few grammatical errors in this chapter; I just missed them during editing(which i admit was a little to hastily done). Nevertheless, I hope you enjoy the story.
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MrLightening 2 years, 2 months ago
Good writing: clear, fluent, but the setting is one I can't relate to. I'm not a sci-fi fan myself, and you haven't won me over here. Two and a half stars.
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