All Comments by terelyn

Good writing here, thanks :)

Very nice, my favorite :D

A very well written story, thanks. We'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Tasty story, a nice read, thanks.

You know, it's kind of funny (the chapter). I'm taking of adding another lol... I've bookmarked your page friend.

I guess, we'll be waiting for the next chapter. A good read, thanks.

Cool writing!

Scary stuff, write more.

Wonderful prayer :)

Nice one, I just saw some minor typo errors but a good read, thanks.

Beautiful words my friend.

You have to write more, this one's a cliffhanger, thanks.

Very well written, thanks.

Really nice message for Christians, thanks.

A very nice message. Thank you.

Loved the rhymes :)

Very sad writing. I can relate with this one, its either we take it or leave it. But, if its worth it... well just ignore and best live what's in our heart. Write more.

Cool writing friend. Love how you ended it. Quite a cliff hanger :)

So sad and beautiful :( I am definitely going to wait for the next chapter.

You are so kind writerwannabe. I am an Asian from where? Not important. Anyway with the comments I'm getting, I'm sure they will not be proud of me. As with this story, I lost my taste writing this. I'll start with another story. But, I'll be sure to proof read it the next time. Grammatical errors and the tenses are always a problem to me. Have a nice day, friend.

Wow! Thanks writerwannabe. I guess I'll have to work harder :(

LOL! You should have your testimony in writing like this one. Lets send this to the cops. But who would believe an orangutan? I enjoyed reading your story. Thanks!

Chilly tale. Congratulations. A job well done.

You've written it very well. I learned a lot from this. Thanks for posting :)

Wow! Thanks, hebe6405. Great suggestions. Storymash will be a challenge for me. I guess, I better write carefully the next time. I will remember everything you said. You are a very good critic. Have a nice day :)

The usual comment lol! Thanks for noticing. How do you proof read? Is there such a word processor for this? I am not an American. Thanks!

Nice one. I'll wait for your next post :)

I can't wait for the next chapter :)

I love the way you've written it. You can still continue this if you want to. How about making this as a prologue of the real story? That would do it.

Thank you. But, you see. This one is an error. I was suppose to continue this story for the Campus Witch. But, instead I had publish this as another story.
If you liked this one, the beginning is in The Campus Witch. I am very new to this site. I made several bloopers :)
I won't waste this chapter though. I'll think of a story as a continuation for this one.
Thanks again.

Thank you.

I guess my style wasn't effective. Thank you for the suggestion. I guess I can still continue this, can't I?