Absolutely brilliant. Really added depth to the feeling of hatred the boy felt for Uncle Frank. And I loved the way you phrased Uncle Frank's dialogue when he was talking to the boy. It was the perfect words to make him seem heartless and cold, which would let the reader feel exactly what the boy was feeling. Very good writing and very good details. FIVE STARS from me!

Dresdendoll, when you mentioned Frank's name in the chapter before mine, I gotta be honest with you, I hadn't remembered reading about him earlier in the story. I'd assumed you were introducing a new point for the next writer to talk about, to take the story in another direction. So that's what I did. I suppose I should have read the entire story a second time to be sure I had my facts correct. But thank you for looking past that and giving me a rating based on just my writing.
P.S. I LOVE everything you added to the story as well. You are quite the amazing writer yourself. :)

And thank you as well KatofTroy. I appreciate the helpful comment, especially coming from someone with your great writing ability. :)