Discussion of "Swishtales 2: Father Wrog" by teddydragonbear
dkk4510 4 years ago
In this one, there was more than just missing commas. It did cause a bit of distraction for me. Other than that, I thought it was extremely cute! Socks on fire? How fun! Keep it up!
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