Interesting. Where does she go from here? I think she should seduce the Pirate captain and start giving him suggestions.

Where did she go? How old is she? Does she have more secrets? Most people that have one secret like that are known to have more. You've got my curiosity peaked.

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine

I like this.

The beat was easily felt in the rhythm at the start, but got lost along the way.

Sounds just like a teenager. I enjoyed this. You've got me wondering.

Very enjoyable to read.

I liked this muches. Sort of reminds me of what I feel a woman should be at that age. I could see her dignity showing in what you wrote. Still really don't see a story, but this could be a great platform to tell a really good one. Fairy Tales don't just happen to the young. She could be about to start her very own. This Fairy Tale cottage could be the doorway to something rather magical.

sad, but intense. What does she look like? Why did she fall for this guy? Why did he fall for her? Is he really cheating or did someone very very bad leave that belt buckle to cause trouble?

this is a poem of feeling. One should let themselves feel it instead of studying the flow or writing of it.

The writing of it does show you are still learning and you have started on a good path.

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine

You need to use Spell Check.
I liked the tale from the view that you used, but it does lose Fairy Taleness. But I do believe there is hope.
Try describing this Princess Sam. Why is she a reporter. This could turn into her fairy tale and an adventure just for her because she is researching this tale.

Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine

almost as intense as the first. But still grabbed me.