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Discussion of "Beautiful Enemy - Patrick Stump Story" by taylorstump23


1 Lika 4 years, 12 months ago Reply

High energy . I liked it . Some misspelled words , but I liked the story so much I didn't care about any of the errors .
By the way , it seems like non-fiction , but did it really happen ?


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1 bjv 4 years, 12 months ago Reply

Interesting tale with a lot of dialogue. A few unanswered questions. Who was the guy in the black trench coat? What ever happened to Shelby? Curious about the title. Who was the beautiful enemy? How does it tie into the story.


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1 taylorstump23 4 years, 12 months ago Reply

hahaa , yeah i've realized that there is a few spelling errors. and no, it didn't really happen.

and all the unanswered questions will be answered through out the rest of the story. Chapter two will be coming out shortly. But I will tell you that "Beautiful Enemy" is about the protagonist, Taylor. When Patrick said that they only played their music for the fans, not the enemies.


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1 ladyvike15 4 years, 12 months ago Reply

I really liked this to be honest...There was a couple of little conflicts with it in my personal opinion, but i'm just picky...Good job, looking forward to seeing more of Taylor's story


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