I really really liked it. I would love to see what this Pete is up to and who he is. Nicely written.

I liked that chapter and I wanted to see what he would do next. Join her or be against her.

This is SO good. The kind of story that would keep me up reading all night.

The writing was great, but I really really don't get into gory stories. I do like the dialogue writing. It sounds natural (even if the topic is yucky).

I really liked it. Well written and the story
flowed. Shows what damage community panic can cause to a person's life.

I didn't see any purpose or reason to why they did what they did. Too much gore for the faint of heart (me).

Interesting story of insanity intensifying. Not my
type of story though. Too bloody. I would not read the finished book but only because it would give me nightmares.

I wanted to know what was going to happen to the baby. I really don't understand why more people didn't add on to these stories like they did the first one. There is so much potential in most of them. Anyhow, I really liked this Dean Koonz style of storyline but there wasn't enough. It left me wanting more. Good job.

I couldn't relate to Ms. Dupree. She was so cold. I didn't really connect with the story but it was written really well.

Intriguing. I'm curious which door he will
choose and what will be there as well. It also left me wanting to know what was going on in his building to cause the police to be there. I noticed some problems with paragraph 5 in sentence structure and comprehending what he meant but I got the gist of it. Also a tense miss. But all in all, I liked where the story was headed although I'm still not sure if the story is going to be fantasy, sci-fi, or normal. :o)