Discussion of "An eternity of sadness......." by swift-pen

This story is amazing!! I feel as if I were sitting under that big tree with them and could really feel her pain. I loved it!!

I have read all of you pieces. You have such a diverse ability when telling these stories. The "City of Man" was terrific. It had so much flavor that I actually felt full after reading it. Out of all your works I enjoyed this one the best. I felt as if I were there. Thanks and keep up the good work.

swift-pen...considering writing another chapter but in wanting to stay true to the storyline I need to reconcile the reference to "3 years ago" in the first paragraph and "18 years" in the next to last paragraph. Was this an error or am I just not getting it?

You actually have witnessed a mistake that is not actually a mistake. The problem is that this chapter comes from a book that I am writing. 3 yrs ago refers to the bigger story and the 18 yrs refers to the memory of loss. Sorry I did't catch that and thanks for bringing it to my attention.