That last comment was actually meant for someone else. Sorry

My story was not meant to create a theological forum. I wish you could have ADDED to my chapter instead of changing it. I did like yours though. Just wanted to see where people would take my original view that's all.

You actually have witnessed a mistake that is not actually a mistake. The problem is that this chapter comes from a book that I am writing. 3 yrs ago refers to the bigger story and the 18 yrs refers to the memory of loss. Sorry I did't catch that and thanks for bringing it to my attention.

It's not exactly where I thought the story was gonna go after I started it, but you did a fine job. You have a terrific imagination and kept my mind's eye busy throughout the piece. Great job!!

I like the way you gave my story a complete spin. And by the way, I don't really think I'm the Devil. LOL

I appreciate your comment. I try my best...LOL

I truly appreciate your comment on my piece. I have just begun to apply my thoughts to paper (or monitor screen if you will). Please continue to read my work for I try to be diverse as possible in order to find my "perfect" writing style. Thanks so much.