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The Darkness  by sweetbaby
Life is like hell and hell is on earth. My soul has begun to turn to the dark side. My heart has begun to turn black as darkness and it has reached to the core of my soul… and little by little it’s eating my body from the inside… and now you can see it in my writing. It hurts a lot. The darkness started when I was five and bullied on. That is when it all happened. As time goes by my bliss has become unbliss. In my dreams I’m being cast into an ocean of darkness.  In the real world people see me as precious and blissful but they are wrong. My world is full of darkness and I am feeling more and more dejected then every before. My spirit and soul has turned into darkness like the poems The Raven and the Tell Tale Heart. In the light I seem kind but in the dark you had better stay away from me. If you’ve seen the movies Stay Alive, 13 Ghosts and others you will know to don’t get in my dark side or you will be plunged into a pool of blood and death. If you can save me you must save my heart. If you think about it, it’s like the Kingdom Of Heart games. I’m kind but a little like Riku. Riku was saved. Can you save me from the darkness?
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Date created: Oct. 11, 2008
Date published: Oct. 11, 2008
Comments: total 5
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Word Count: 482
Times Read: 50
Story Length: 1