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summersunset

Date Joined: June 12, 2012
Last Login: June 20, 2012

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2 summersunset 1 year ago Context

I really like your story. But, no offense, it was a bit rushed. If you continue your story more dramatically and not so rushed, it would be an amazing story. :)


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