Discussion of "Lilly and Her Wonderful Peach Scented Adventures" by stringstrumer8

WOW! They say that rats and monkees are intelligent creatures. Do you think that they have imaginations? I soppose that if they did, they would show that anybody or anything can write better than you. keep up the hard work, you make people like jakestar look like Nebula candidates.

God, I get that it was bad but you didn't actually give me any information. You didn't tell me what you didn't like, you just told me I suck. At least give me a tip to be better if you're going to comment.

Beautiful, poignant and totally painted a picture! Please continue!!!

You made me feel bad, because you come across so eager for productive criticism. If I had to be honest, I would point to the fact that it was too short. Honestly, its excellent scene. It pulls you in with the warm discription and makes you want to stay there...and then the bloody story ends. What kind of a sick joke is that? Finish it or add to it or something...don't waste talent on three sentances...its like a date without conversation.

I actually wrote a sequel to it and it got deleted. I do have some ideas for a second I just haven't written it yet.

Well pease continue...I will definitely check it out

I found nothing wrong with your writings whatsoever. In my opinion, it is not okay to criticize someone who is using their power to write. The more you write the better you become. It shouldnt matter what you write, as long as you write, and it has nothing vulgar in it. Writing is a privilege of the mind for those of us who possess it.

If aptriplett is going to be a writing critic, he should learn to spell.