That was so beautiful! I'm actually a singer/guitarist and I write my own songs, but I havn't been able to write any lyrics lately. If I give you full credit, can I use your poem in a song? Please!?

I actually wrote a sequel to it and it got deleted. I do have some ideas for a second I just haven't written it yet.

God, I get that it was bad but you didn't actually give me any information. You didn't tell me what you didn't like, you just told me I suck. At least give me a tip to be better if you're going to comment.

Wow this is really impressive. It was a little hard to follow but I liked how you stayed true to the characters. For example, you wrote that Nurse Mary Jane has long red finger nails. That totally fits her personality!

this was great! You really did you research. I especially liked the part about the fairies, they really did believe in them.

So if anyone wants to continue this the story is Rebecca.

Thank you so mush for asking me to participate, feel so honored. Sadly, I think who you have writing now is doing so fantastically I don't want to mess up the groove. Thank you though!

Thanks! The reason the homeless guy is so young is because I intented for him to be a love intrest when she made it to the sixeen hundreds.

k so I wrote the story I want you to continue. It's called Rebecca, but before I publish it I would love your feedback. Let me know what you think!

I love the idea! I really like the idea of judging being a selected number of judges that read through all the chapters and decide which one is the best. Voting won't be totally fair if you base it off storymash member's vote's because many people don't vote on the story, they vote on the author.