Discussion of "The lost" by sting2071232
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alharris 1 year, 6 months ago
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Great first chapter. I had a friend named Sweaty once. The dude couldn't eat a bowl of chili without perspiring. Ok, there are some obvious typos. Clean it up before publishing next time. Watch your tenses. Regardless of the minor writing errors, this piece is evidence that you are a creative and skilled writer. Welcome to SM. |
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