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srx-19

Date Joined: April 24, 2011
Last Login: Dec. 26, 2011
I'm a 19 year old girl in the UK. I enjoy reading, writing, watching films, walking and playing sport. I also like going away to a different country in the summer holidays.

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1 srx-19 2 years, 11 months ago Context

great stuff :)


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2 srx-19 2 years, 11 months ago Context

Haha theres no need to be nervous. I'll keep in touch with your profile. Happy posting :)


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1 srx-19 2 years, 11 months ago Context

great start. you set the scene well. there is obviously a story behind this character. cant wait for next chapter :)


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2 srx-19 2 years, 11 months ago Context

good start. you set the scene well and some good descriptions. tension is high. cant wait to read more :)


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1 srx-19 2 years, 11 months ago Context

i feel sorry for the poor souls that died. all is looking well for richard though. cant wait for next chapter :)


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1 srx-19 2 years, 11 months ago Context

great imagery. i like where its going. cant wait to read more :)


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2 srx-19 2 years, 11 months ago Context

this is great. i see the tension rising. when you did the next chapter you could have clicked on write next chaper just underneath. doesnt matter though. great story and cant wait to read more :)


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1 srx-19 3 years, 3 months ago Context

Well written and emotional. I like it :)


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2 srx-19 3 years, 3 months ago Context

thanks again. I remembered what you said about backgrounds to characters. So I'm trying to do it and make it flow well with the story. I just hope that it works well.


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1 srx-19 3 years, 3 months ago Context

sounds good. And a bit like the start of a film. For some reason i was reading it in a Patrick Stewart voice. Looking forward to reading more :)


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