Discussion of "Reflection - Day 15" by squarehopper

Glad to see your contribution. I will read ASAP.

I hope it is ok.

I really enjoyed this.

With death slowly approaching, his mind takes on a philsophical way of thinking and how you presented it was brilliant.

Very real and true to life. You moved the storyline forward by mentioning that his family were going to be financially stable in his absence. The comparison of the tumor to childbirth, very well written and the story held my attention.
The mention of such things were needed in the story. Thank you for contributing.

Thank you. It wasn't the most polished I could have made it. But if this goes any further I will be happy to do so.