somethingdignified |
Date Joined: Sept. 23, 2008
Last Login: May 27, 2011 |
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24 Comments by somethingdignified
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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only one way to find out |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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i am getting a really clear picture of how warm and loving these dogs are, and the colors were great at first, but i think the style your writing about is missing out without taking advantage of their stature and those 'interesting places' you have to yank them from. i'd like to get a clearer picture of their stature and frame. |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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i love the idea of a blonde butt fitting a dog's character... |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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yeah man that's good stuff |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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that sounded evocatively coy despite the dry archetype, awesome |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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like if sensitivity had radar or if radar was organic, plants not to blame, aphids not to blame, chemicals not to blame, human folly- blip, blip, blip |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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easy to visualize, like reading the gardening channel |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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so romantic |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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so scared to touch upon it man... starting to see why catcher in the rye was all outside... the world of warcraft was a really nice touch, fantasies within fantasies, no time for real life, booze booze booze... i would not shy away from titling your obsession in the beginning with 'things about her', definitley defines your character though... so borderline smut it makes it easy to not care |
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somethingdignified 2 years, 7 months ago
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your quickly becoming the mother superior for Alyssa junkies everywhere, no wonder my ratings are going higher :) i can't help but wonder if i've got a shot |
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14 Chapters by somethingdignified
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2.9/5.0 - published May 27, 2011 - no comments (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Aug 11, 2009 - no comments (preview)
I had written a poem about my ex girlfriend I had called The Sandbox. I stretched it out to this idea of flirting and lust at first sight and lust-based excuses in general growing out of a fertile relationship.
Tags: flirtation, imaginary, infidelity, love, lust, memory, regret |
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 03, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
The hallway door tired of my prying tells me to get laid and I acquiesce. Convention my foot.
Tags: advice, personification, relentless, romance, submission |
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3.6/5.0 - published Jul 02, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 02, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
A bantering session of bonding between me and Orby while the hallway closet tries to play it cool
Tags: affection, anxiety, longing, personification |
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3.9/5.0 - published Jun 30, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
The hallway closet is believed to be vexed and the bedknob, Orby, may be less of a cynic than he realized he was being.
Tags: midnight, perception, personifying |
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4.5/5.0 - published Jun 29, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Jun 29, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
saw the title under the 10 minute contest and couldn't resist, great start up enilezah
Tags: chewing, indulgence, nails, obsession, resistance |
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4.0/5.0 - published Jun 28, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
I can only access online in my room with my laptop in a certain spot on my bed. since this contest is every day i figured looking straight ahead would give me a still-life conducive to my internet weakness. Behold: bedknob and hallway closet- the poe
Tags: and, bedknobs, descriptions, faces, in, little, loathing, my, peace, peaches |
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3.8/5.0 - published Jun 13, 2009 - no comments (preview)
One boy's dull praying leads to insights of how life may be for the immortal.
Tags: fiction, god, immortality, possibility, prayer, quaint, science, silly, space, thought |
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4.6/5.0 - published Jun 05, 2009 - 7 comments (preview)
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0.5/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Oct 18, 2008 - no comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Sep 23, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
Ideally, this would be one, likely the first, of an anthology of short stories about homeless people.
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