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Discussion of "Doesn't Have A Title" by solo5


1 Hudson1 3 years ago Reply

The funniest part about this is,"She was pretty for someone who was forty something," you must be quite young! i just recently turned 41, and feel pretty good for my age. I am rather fat, my hairline is receding rapidly, but more woman show interest in me now then in jr. high or high school, when i was extremely interested in women. Don't worry, aging is not that bad! i feel that you have a good gift of description. you know how to speak slow and give the details. i am always in too big of a rush to tell my story, as if i'm running out of time to do it. i don't know if you should continue the story, that is up to you. but i would never discourage a writer from writing. don't give up!


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1 solo5 3 years ago Reply

thank you so much. i am pretty young and your right forites isn't very old...however i usually rush as well i went over this so many times its not even funny, trying to make sure i didn't rush


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1 solo5 3 years ago Reply

btw i enjoy your stories and don't think you rush too much


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1 Hudson1 2 years, 12 months ago Reply

thanks. don't worry about rushing, i'm in my forties and i can still rush. the older you get, the more you can slow down. you can still have energy in your forties depending on if you exercise. as you get older, you won't rush your stories so much, but practice makes perfect. good luck!


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