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8 comments
2 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

Oh no!
Inspector Lawood is not a good guy at all.
What is he going to do with Hina?


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2 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

The start was great. I thought everything was about to be okay. But this is strange. I think this is a big joke.


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2 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

Thank God she went to the police.
I hope Lawood is good.


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2 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

I wonder what she is going to do.
She is a brave girl that Hina


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2 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

Oh no!
I don't want him to die!
*cries in a corner* *sob*


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1 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

This story is going great!
I hope it's a friend.
But I may be wrong.
Please save Hina and her dad!


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1 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

Oh my God!
I don't want them to die!
Make it stop!
I want to read more!


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2 smile 6 years, 6 months ago Context

Wow, this is so cool and emotional. I want to read more.
Keep on writing.
Yeah!


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