Oh no!
Inspector Lawood is not a good guy at all.
What is he going to do with Hina?

The start was great. I thought everything was about to be okay. But this is strange. I think this is a big joke.

Thank God she went to the police.
I hope Lawood is good.

I wonder what she is going to do.
She is a brave girl that Hina

Oh no!
I don't want him to die!
*cries in a corner* *sob*

This story is going great!
I hope it's a friend.
But I may be wrong.
Please save Hina and her dad!

Oh my God!
I don't want them to die!
Make it stop!
I want to read more!

Wow, this is so cool and emotional. I want to read more.
Keep on writing.
Yeah!