You'll see.. The story continues.

Very good!! And also very intriguing. Very strange how these sonic anomalies cant be explained. Great writing baby.

Thank you, Nash. I appreciate that lots.

Sweet! A modern werewolf story that encompasses current pop slang like "O-M-G" and ISN'T gay like Twilight! Love it! Keep it going!

I love it, sweety. Very suspenseful! I'm so proud of you!

very nice!! well, sad, but nicely done.

Nice!!

Very nice! Keep going.

You know, Mr. Nashville.. I was just going to allow your glorious responses to slide, since I was always to taught that the best response is no response, as it pertains to opposition. However, since you seem to be the "Big fish" in the small SM pond, I'm sure that anything I have to say to you will just be snickered upon as you fog your nails and rub them against your shirt. First off, I'm hard pressed to find a bone in my body that's giving me the urge to say.. "Please! O' mighty one, give me a patented nash critique!" So, as far as your offer.. well you know where you can stick that. Secondly, when I first joined this site, I was under the impression that people (other than members) actually frequent it.. If I'm wrong, I apologize. Anyway, it seems to be a "who's who" site where only the authors fellowship with one another and that's how your material gets read. I've told countless people to go to this site and read, not just mine but other stories from other authors. I may not comment much on people's writing, but that doesn't neccesarily mean that I don't read them.Forgive me for whining about feedback, that was indeed childish. And excuse me all to hell if I don't have oodles of time to just sit around and write, and nothing but.. Speaking of butt, maybe you should get off of your's Mr. Becker as well as your high horse, and pursue a little bit more in life than just oggling the computer screen. as far as me having the wrong guy for amassing comments, it is YOU sir who has the wrong guy if you think I am entertained by your ramblings and so on and so forth. Let's not forget that debaucle you attached to the "Dark Stalkers" story. If you could see the look on people's faces whom I've had read the story front to back.. Well, let's just say that you'd be humbled.(And by the way, they were unbiased). I can appreciate the fact that you are regarded as Christ on this site.. However, I'm trying to recall the last time I strolled down the book aisle at Publix and saw a novel with your name on it... oh wait.. I haven't.. Good day to you sir, I hope that you've enjoyed this UFC Jab. I look forward to any Jabs or crosses you wish to take at me.. Makes life fun I think..

I am Sidscifi, and I couldn't care less if you approved your message...

ok.. thank you.