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Don't let me down  by shlbs16

Why are you so mean

At least that’s what it seems

You tell me my stories stink

And I far as pretty as pink

 

Well it hurts me bad

It makes me sad

Why let me down

And shove me on the ground

 

My stories are mine

They help me to shine

So don’t give me one star

Cuz you aren’t looking far

 

Just skip my story

Act like you’re in a hurry

 

People spend time

Writing away their dreams

Yet many people shatter

What will now never be

 

With much time and effort

Each story has a meaning

And putting it down

Tears dreams and hurts feelings

 

If you hate a story

Don’t tell them you do

Move on and ignore it

And they won’t feel like poo

 

Each story has a meaning

And a pain deep inside

Each story is spectacular

And will take you on a ride

 

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Date created: Aug. 31, 2010
Date published: Aug. 31, 2010
Comments: 0
Tags: a, judge, never, story
Word Count: 461
Times Read: 90
Story Length: 1