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shafi1990

Date Joined: Oct. 4, 2008
Last Login: Sept. 17, 2012

4 Comments by shafi1990

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1 shafi1990 4 years, 4 months ago Context

Oh my God, I was reading the story with a smile until the end when i was shocked. What a sad ending awww!

Good write but your 'Is' in the title doesn't fit in with 'beats'.

Maybe it should have been 'Heart Beats'

But no worries! Lovely story! (But it had a sad ending lol)


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1 shafi1990 4 years, 4 months ago Context

just ignore the end bit the the 2nd stanza. forgot to rub it off!


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1 shafi1990 4 years, 4 months ago Context

maybe it would also be a good idea to add other sections on this site which also relate to creative writing such as:

Poetry - yes we have mentioned this lol
Plays - this would be a great idea for those who write plays
scripts - same as plays!
songs - this would be creative!

and anything else anyone?

I hope you like these suggestions! Bye!


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1 shafi1990 4 years, 5 months ago Context

a nice poem!


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