Discussion of "A Day Late and a Dollar Short" by shadinah

Loving the new characters brought in. Zeke seriously cracks me up! Nash made a pretty hard chapter to follow, but I think you rose to the occasion beautifully. Well done!

I like how you kept with Nash's pacing/flow for this chapter - telling stories within a story. Nicely written. Nice progression. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Excellent chapter, shadinah!! Like hebe, I especially enjoyed how you kept the tone and pace that nash established, introduced some fascinating new characters and the sub-plots are all perfectly melded into the storyline. As with nash and his tub, you avoided direct description of exactly how the atom smasher was lifted... lol...gotta love that kind mystery.

Shadinah, great chapter. I love the snippets from several different characters. You left a lot for future authors to build on.

WWB is right: not describing how the item was taken makes it that much more engaging.

Fantastic!! Great new characters, great mystery, and the gold throne is a perfect clue. I think Joe and his kid are going to be interesting additions. You write well under pressure that's for sure;)

How does one steal such an item? Hmm...Some of our characters must have powerful connections. :)