Discussion of "Giant Rock: The Conception" by shadinah

Very cool continuation. You're pulling the threads together for the big finale... And I love the twist of Rachel's origins!

Long time no see and look what you have wrought! A masterpiece! ;o)

Your writing is always technically proficient and so are all the other facets of the writing trade (most of the time...lol).

Here you've done a spectacular job in all ways!

Your scenes of the past were perfect - mixing the facts, incorporating new ones and as your sister said...the twist that brought Rachel's origins to light was pure genius.

I'm really happy you joined this project...ya done good...real good!! ;o)