Somehow, I get the feeling that it's far from over...

Absolutely hilarious - good work, and can't wait to see the next installment!

That was a fascinating conclusion! There were some issues with flow and writing technicalities, but if the grammar nazi didn't tackle you, I won't either. I agree - it was a hard story to write. I hadn't realized it was based on an actual person, but the research and trying to tie in actual facts in with the fiction brought a fun element to it. I hope you enjoyed that as well. I loved the twist at the end! The whole time travel idea was mind bending, but you seemed to pull it off well - tied up loose ends. And I loved the crash in Roswell... Good job!

Okay, verbally kicking your butt... I managed my three week deadline, so I'm holding you to your self-imposed one! :)
Anyway, the story is incredible, and I can't wait to see where it goes. The networks are fascinating - tangible, but not? I loved the bit about him practicing on himself! lol And his modest pride in his work. Amazing character. I can easily see this being published someday.

chapter six is done - WBScott - you've got three weeks... ;)

okay - the draft of chapter six is up - if y'all have any suggestions/changes, let me know by the end of today. Thanks!

Ah, I'll make an attempt. If I don't manage, y'all can fire me...

I had to go back and re-read this from the first chapter, since it's been so long... What an awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love the way you handled the meeting with the Maker - beautiful allegory! And can't wait to see what plan Michael cooks up. :)

Very cool! I can totally relate to the pain induced disorientation - it came across very well.

What a hoot! I probably shouldn't have read this now, as I just got my abdomen cut open, and it hurts to laugh, but it was worth it!!!