Discussion of "Launder Midnight" by sevenseas

Very nice. I like where you took this. I think I'll write my own second chapter, but would like to see you or someone continue this as well.

Thank you. I really liked your first chapter - humorous but also intriguing. I look forward to seeing what you have planned next for Matt! Hopefully his Friday gets more interesting. But will his clothes ever get dry?? That's the big question!

Will the black-clad femme mystique be Matt's "cool girl"? Does the future hold a hook up for him, or something slightly less pleasant?

I like the way this chapter proceeded. Fairly realistic, and Matt's attitude is enjoyably real.

And if his clothes get dry, will he need them?

Good questions! And thank you for the compliment. I wonder if Matt WILL need his clothes...hmmm!

very nice continuation! It's got some savorable local detail (like the "wan yellow light" and the cell phone snapping shut) that really sets a nice tone. It makes me want to know what happens next, or make it up myself ...
(btw, thanks for checking out "Mathilda's Misfortune" - it was my first post ever. Have you ever actually made any money off of this thing? Anyways, keep up the good work!)

Great Mash, sevenseas! Dang, now I don't know which 2d chapter to mash, myself...lol. Well, maybe I'll just sit back and watch you all take it away.

Nope, scratch that, I mashed your own second chapter...hope you like.

Nope, scratch that, I mashed your own second chapter...hope you like.