Discussion of "The Painful Awareness of Something Not Quite Right" by sevenseas
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OriginalSim 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Rock on! Great follow up to a lousy first chapter!!!! ;o) |
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sevenseas 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Haha thanks, but I didn't think the first chapter was lousy at all! I thought your descriptions were really vivid and crazy. |
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mari7789 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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I liked the chapter and wrote a follow up chapter titled "Take a Little Trip" However I am new to this site and hope I posted it correctly. Let me know what you think when you get a minute. |
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sevenseas 10 months, 1 week ago
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I liked your chapter a lot! I actually wrote a continuation off the continuation of your chapter...if that makes any sense. |
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MysticPen 10 months, 1 week ago
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Nice descriptions! |
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sevenseas 10 months, 1 week ago
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Thank you! |
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philly1 10 months, 1 week ago
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I agree nice descriptions and keep it going I'm interested. Check out trapped and read the start of the story it's pretty good. |
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sevenseas 10 months, 1 week ago
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Thanks! I will certainly read Trapped. |
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vargasha 10 months, 1 week ago
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Yo! I was just returning the favor, thanks for your comments. I have just finished the Second Chapter of Cenicienta. You should check it out. |
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sevenseas 10 months, 1 week ago
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Just finished doing so - another great chapter! You describe things so very well. I think you should definitely work on continuing the story. |
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