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rosegarden

Date Joined: June 5, 2008
Last Login: June 18, 2009

17 Comments by rosegarden

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1 rosegarden 6 years, 1 month ago Context

TuBeDrunk, I love your bit on attitude in your comments. It is exactly what I needed to read today as I was feeling somewhat down as you sounded in your story. Even fickle writers need love.


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1 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

Thank you for taking the reins. I thought I knew where I wanted to take the story, but kept getting stuck. The only critique I have is you made a reference to our mothers as being young, while in my chapter I described them as "old enough to be our Grandmothers". Other than that, you've done very well and I appreciate that you've chosen my story to continue.


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1 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

I've been rolling this idea around in my head for a while. You've encouraged me to continue. Thank you.


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1 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

This story can stand alone as a short story or be continued in another chapter and I like that. The writer gives the reader a glimpse of Jonathan's pain and anger so that the reader wants to almost cheer him on.


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1 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

ARHD I think you've been in my mind. I want to put a lot of thought into this and possibly write the next chapter.


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1 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

Very entertaining and well written. Loads of possiblities that get my creative juices flowing.


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1 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

If aptriplett is going to be a writing critic, he should learn to spell.


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2 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

I enjoy a good vampire tale and this one fits the bill although I did get a little confused. Sevver seems to be the predator at first and then Armani Guy took over. All in all, it's a good time.


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1 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

Thank you. I'm thrilled and flattered.


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2 rosegarden 6 years, 2 months ago Context

Thank you, StoryMash, for being a great outlet.


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