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Discussion of "Running - Day 16" by rocklee11416


1 rocklee11416 5 years, 10 months ago Reply

I'm not done yet just saving so I can lay down and get the ideas rolling. If you don't like it just gimme a comment and I'll change direction...


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1 theblackhand 5 years, 10 months ago Reply

Not a bad direction you are going in.
Just touch it up good and proofread. I saw alot of mistakes in your story....


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1 rocklee11416 5 years, 10 months ago Reply

Thanks...sorry I haven't gotten to the proofread yet. I probably won't be able to continue today...Homework sorry...I'll have it finished soon (Monday or Tuesday)...All thanks to your first chapter...


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1 rocklee11416 5 years, 10 months ago Reply

If you read please comment :D!


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1 theblackhand 5 years, 10 months ago Reply

Nice continuation rocklee.

I like the fact of him running away. Now it is up to the net masher to decide what happens next.

Thank you


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1 moonglow 5 years, 10 months ago Reply

Great writing!


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1 rocklee11416 5 years, 10 months ago Reply

Thanks!. So who is the next masher?


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