Discussion of "Running - Day 16" by rocklee11416

I'm not done yet just saving so I can lay down and get the ideas rolling. If you don't like it just gimme a comment and I'll change direction...

Not a bad direction you are going in.
Just touch it up good and proofread. I saw alot of mistakes in your story....

Thanks...sorry I haven't gotten to the proofread yet. I probably won't be able to continue today...Homework sorry...I'll have it finished soon (Monday or Tuesday)...All thanks to your first chapter...

If you read please comment :D!

Nice continuation rocklee.

I like the fact of him running away. Now it is up to the net masher to decide what happens next.

Thank you

Great writing!

Thanks!. So who is the next masher?