well i haven't much experience in spousal relationships-still a minor
but yea i guess i'd agree
although i doubt thats the case in all marriages
maybe that only occurs when the two aren't happy together as seen in this Lost Sock story
sorry about your mom btw
but hey as far as i can see things worked out
maybe you and nash are right(in the comments for the first chapter) for blaming the wife for leaving and in your case your mom
but if i had to live in a life where i was constantly bored and according to your story socially neglected then where else would i have to go but out?
boredom is like torture believe i go through it like everyday

LOL im sorry but imma have to agree
didn't even notice you made a joke
unless Dukes of Hazard was part of it--sorry i didn't watch it lmaoo
well id like you to learn more about em but id find it weird if i mashed my own story =/
thanks lol =D

probably sucks since i didn't bother changing anything. Just felt like writing another story and this was enough to feed my hunger =D

pretty good i love the ending lol great 'twist'
i doubt thatd itd be possible to be more cordial to the delivery man after all those years of marriage but ehh
the beginning seemed to rush actionwise but otherwise great!!

why thank you lol-you made my day =D

yep yep well i didn't get the idea from 'Nashville'
was just watching a show where someone was proposing and then bammmm the idea came
well i was thinkin that either the story could go to another setting
or it could be taken into the future -maybe a glimpse of their marriage? marriage problems? lol idk

AMAZING i agree completely with dog...and now i realize wat i was missing these were addon's of Honey's first chapter...rofl i was wondering why you were writing these small descriptive paragraphssss

i think im missing something
but once again great writing...

great writing cept you've got me wondering if there's actually a story...

thought it was gonna be bad since it was so short but this was so amazing. this ONE paragraph drew me in soooo much