Discussion of "How To Lose Your Shoes While They're Still On Your Feet" by rks5038
jcauthor 5 years, 9 months ago
Good story line.
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livesideways22 5 years, 9 months ago
although the fact that this is a true story, or at least sounds like it, makes it rather comical, making it into a true story-nay epic novel- would have done the storyline good. Add details about the characters (which i can only assume is you) looked like and the setting, as i have no clue where penncrest high is. Great concept, just follow through next time.
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