Crystalfoo--

WOW! This was really good. I would say this is one of the best chapters I've read. Kudos.

--R.J.

Good stuff!

Great Advice!!!

Thanks. I really liked your story, it was really good. Although it took me like 10 years to read because my computer is stupid..
Anyways, thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it.

-Rachel

Once again, Nash. LOVE IT!

Nash,

Thanks so much for your constructive critism. I really appreciate it. I am glad you had the decincy to do it. I completely understand where your coming from. I thought some of the same things as I was reading it. I will take everything to mind while revising it.

I am really thankful that someone like you actually told me what I needed to hear..but keep in mind it may not "float your boat" because I am only 13 years old. I am expirenced and unexpirenced as well in writing.

Total Honesty:
While I was writing this I rushed, I will admit. I have to say when I read this comment of yours, I was a little hurt that you didn't like it as much..but now I see where you were coming from.

Thanks again!

-Rachel J. Lovato

This was really great!

I really like this. It was really AWESOME!
Well, I rated a 4 because I liked the details, very discriptive. I also, thought it was an interesting plot.

Nash,

Thanks so much for your constructive critism. I really appreciate it. I am glad you had the decincy to do it. I completely understand where your coming from. I thought some of the same things as I was reading it. I will take everything to mind while revising it.

I am really thankful that someone like you actually told me what I needed to hear..but keep in mind it may not "float your boat" because I am only 13 years old. I am expirenced and unexpirenced as well in writing.

Total Honesty:
While I was writing this I rushed, I will admit. I have to say when I read this comment of yours, I was a little hurt that you didn't like it as much..but now I see where you were coming from.

Thanks again!

-Rachel J. Lovato

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