Discussion of "Sam" by ridiculosaur

I like it. The style is something like my own so how could I not. Hope you'll get inspired to keep the train of thought going. Seems like a cool beginning.

I'm curious as to what's happened to Sam - I'm curious about Sam all around! I hope this is continued, it has the makings of a very promising story. :)

I liked where you were going, good premise, but it felt very rushed. There also wasn't alot of detail in it, something you need to pull the reader through. Overall though, good starting point.

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it. :)

Nice one. I'll wait for your next post :)