Thank you Dog!! Good to see you still come around once in a while!! :)

Welcome to SM!!! That's the good thing about this site - you don't HAVE to continue a story. Put up an interesting first chapter with a jump-off point for the next, and someone may hop in and get it moving forward.... Feel free to use the forum to 'pimp' your own chapter and see if anyone bites!!Good luck and happy writing!! :)

Hey Kirsten... write a chapter about the Queen. Let everyone know why she is a heroine. You've already written of some admirable qualities she possesses, but I would be interested in reading more about her. But, being 'against the grain' is nice and all, just not absolutely necessary for good literature. I think if you read it, you comprehend it, and you've enjoyed it, then that, my friend, is good literature. Whether it's a 500 page mystery novel, a middle-schooler's essay on what they did over the summer, or the back of a box of Cocoa Puffs..... my humble opinion, anyways. :)

That's great WWB!!! I will def check that out, too. I'm glad to see you are still writing on here! I miss this site.... :/

Interesting views on religion. I feel the same about most of what you said. How are you doing these days, WWB? How is the book coming along???

... minus 'left'... ^

I love this line: 'Within parts of me better left unfelt." :)

Loved it!!! I'm going to read all your chapters now..... I don't know how it took me so long to come across you, but I'm glad I did!!

I found this very interesting. Some grammatical errors, such as run-on sentences, improper use of commas, missing punctuation, etc. It did detract from the flow of the story, but not enough to deter me from finishing it. Please continue, but proof-read before you publish. Control the pace a bit more, as well. I'm not trying to put you down; I think you have talent and I would like to see you succeed. :)

I think everyone has days like this - and I think it appeals to every single mom out there!!