Hey expressionarchitect, I'm right with you, I think that criticism and down right cruelty are two different things. I am a published author as well. I don't criticize anyone unless they are lashing out at me or someone else for that matter. I think that only an editor basically should be giving criticism. Everything is just an opinion for those probably havent been writing for 26 years or longer.

jakestar,, I believe that this aptriplett is the imposter, and he or she must be quite an idiot. Criticising when they can barely spell.. The Apoligizes I think was from the real apttriplett not the imposter.

dearest aptriplett,, i know this isnt you, its the imposter,, well, you could stand to edit a little yourself, or at least learn how to spell.

What areas do you think its lacking, i'm kind of curious to know. I thought it was written well, which is what I look for when reading someones writings. It just appears to me like you are criticizing. Your comments are somewhat critical. When I read someones writings, I comment about the story if it was well written. If it was not well written, I just cant give my point of view. I think there is alot of potential in this writing. Now if you could really read into it, why wouldnt it be an actual story?

I don't see it as a summary. What I see it as, was, what could, or should have been, but never was. It shows that no matter where you are, time passes by quicker than you can blink and eye. It's sounds like it's from a man's perspective, or you might say, the man himself. I really dont know. To me, it sounds like deep heartache that just never goes away.

"Wow, I hope they find each other someday."

use spell check.. that's all you have to do, it's very simple. So dont worry

well, there is actually something called the blue green algae, they sell it in caplets, its suppose to help or take care to the cancers natually, because the doctor world, they dont want you to know anything about anything natural, because they are in it big with the sucking pharmcuetical companies, who are probably killing more people than the cancer alone.

this is a poem that was written ten years ago, its about a heart breaking, as hearts seldom do.